My rewrite

Author:	Troll's Hole
Date:	2017-03-12 12:57:59
In Reply To:	My rewrite of Guns n' Roses' "Double Talkin' Jive" by T.J. Swoboda
Views:	138

Found a Leprous CD in a garbage can
Don't know where it's been
Been listening to prog for oh so long
I gotta take it home

What the fuck is this? It's their latest album called The Congregation
What the fuck is this? LIES! No polyrhythms man!

My rewrite of Guns n' Roses' "Double Talkin' Jive" - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-10
- One of my favorite GnR songs, but also a Running Wild "Bad to the Bone" ripoff. np - Thy Sentinel 2017-03-21
- My fifth rewrite - Troll's Hole 2017-03-12
  - You missed your calling as the Swedish Weird Al. (nt) - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-12
    - My Weird Al style rewrites - Troll's Hole 2017-03-13
      - Re: My Weird Al style rewrites - Chris F5 2017-03-13
        
        Re: My Weird Al style rewrites - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-13
- Small potatoes - Genghis Grim 2017-03-13
- My second rewrite - Troll's Hole 2017-03-12
  - Still 10/10. I wouldn't have put it past them to write songs about sushi in '90'-'91, though. (nt) - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-12
- My rewrite - Troll's Hole 2017-03-12
  - 10/10 (nt) - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-12
- My fourth rewrite - Troll's Hole 2017-03-12
- My third rewrite - Troll's Hole 2017-03-12
- I don't know the original, but these aren't half bad. - nvandyk 2017-03-11
  - Thanks! It's one of GnR's better songs IMO, but again just musically; lyrically not so much. :) (nt) - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-11
- I dunno, maybe mine's even worse. Oh well, I tried. :-P (nt) - T.J. Swoboda 2017-03-10